My paper is very unorganized. I had a hard time understanding the topic in general. I was confused as to which advertisements to choose and what to argue about. I need some help trying to organize the entire paper. I felt as if I repeated myself quite a bit.
Your paper isn't as unorganized as you think. You have a good thesis, and you support it well. Maybe you could elaborate more on different aspects of the ad or just merge what you already have into sound paragraphs. There is some repetition, but is just of general things. I feel like you could fix this just by re-wording certain sentences.
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